评改四级作文语法错误It's so freedom studying in camus!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more chances to make decisions on their study.When students selec

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评改四级作文语法错误It's so freedom studying in camus!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more chances to make decisions on their study.When students selec
评改四级作文语法错误
It's so freedom studying in camus!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more chances to make decisions on their study.
When students select their lecturers,they will try their best to search every chips of lecturers' information.Is the lecturera master in his/her specialty?What does his/her study point?Besides what mentioned above,students usually think about utilitarian questions like whether the lecturer gives high scores and so on.
Without doubting,campus students selecting lecturers will gibe more chances to them find a lecturer who is suit themselves because everyone's characteristic and study style are different.However,it may lead to problem that some students may only focus on the utilitarian factors.

评改四级作文语法错误It's so freedom studying in camus!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more chances to make decisions on their study.When students selec
文章整体写的不错!只是还有一些词语用法错误以及打错的词,在此一起指出来,与你共同学习并提高.
It's so【 freedom--free前面有缩略词is,表明此处用形容词】【studying------to study】 in 【camus--campus打错】!Now some universities allow students to select not only their subjects but also their lecturers.That means students have more 【chances—chance表示“可能性”经常用单数】to make decisions on their study.
When students select their lecturers,they will try their best to search every chips of 【加the或their】lecturers' information.Is the lecturer【加a】 master in his/her specialty?What does his/her study point?Besides what【have been （what从句谓语动词不全面,该是被动语态】 mentioned above,students usually think about utilitarian questions like whether the lecturer gives high scores and so on.
Without 【doubting--dout直接可以用作名词】,campus students selecting lecturers will 【gibe--give】 more chances （表示“机遇”可以不改,用复数）to them find a lecturer who is 【suit——suitable】【for】 themselves because everyone's characteristic and study style are different.However,it may lead to 【加such】【problems】【 that——as 】some students may only focus on the utilitarian factors.【原来语法并不错,只是整体表达效果没有改动后更充分】

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It's so freedom studying in camus!改成You have so much freedom studying in campus now.
Is the lecturera master in his/her specialty?建议specialty改为area
Besides what mentioned above建议what后面加has been.
Without doubting, campus students selecting lecturers will gibe more chances to them find a lecturer who is suit themselves.改成With no doubt, campus students selecting lecturers will give them a chance to find the most suitable lecturer for themselves.
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1.freedom换成free
2.camus换成campus
3.subjects换成courses
4.That means换成It means that
5.最好将When students select中的select换成selected
6.lecturera拼错了吧换成lecturer
7. Is the lecturera master in his/her specialty? What does his/her study point?
想表达什么？
8.What mentioned换成What were mentioned
9.think about最好换成consider about
10.Without doubting换成Without doubts
11.students selecting最好换成students' selecting
12.is suit换成is suitable for
13.problem换成a problem

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