求英语大神修改,批改网10分就行There are many parts that are essential for us,such as parents, friends, couples, jobs, money and so on. Yes, they do. However, the idea in my view that what we can't afford to lose is faith.Maybe many people

求英语大神修改,批改网10分就行There are many parts that are essential for us,such as parents, friends, couples, jobs, money and so on. Yes, they do. However, the idea in my view that what we can't afford to lose is faith.Maybe many people
求英语大神修改,批改网10分就行
There are many parts that are essential for us,such as parents, friends, couples, jobs, money and so on. Yes, they do. However, the idea in my view that what we can't afford to lose is faith.
Maybe many people can't agree with me, but it is really a truth. Without faith, we can't find the goal which makes us powerful. Without faith, we can't find the value of ourselves and gradually we will become nothing.
It is a phenomenon that there are many people in China becoming materialistic and they are nbspMental vacancy. They regard money as the God and nothing can't be solved with money. However, they don't know that if money be not the servant, it will be the master. They live just in order to survive, just like the animal.
That is what I want to say. Faith is important, faith can distinguish between human and animal. Therefore, what we can't afford to lose is faith

求英语大神修改,批改网10分就行There are many parts that are essential for us,such as parents, friends, couples, jobs, money and so on. Yes, they do. However, the idea in my view that what we can't afford to lose is faith.Maybe many people
There are many parts (that are)删除 essential for us,such as parents,friends,couples,jobs,money and so on.Yes,they do.However,the (idea)删除,改only thing in my view (thatis what )删除we can't afford to lose is faith.
Maybe many people can't agree with me,but it is really a truth.Without faith,we can't find (the goal )改our goals which make(s)删除us powerful .Without faith,we can't find the value(s) of ourselves (and) 改then gradually we will become nothing.
It is a (phenomenon) 更多的用来说奇迹that there are many people in China becoming materialistic and they are nbspMental vacancy.They regard money as the God and nothing can't be solved with money.However,they don't know that if money be not the servant,it will be the master.They live just in order to survive,just like the animal.
That is what I want to say.Faith is important,faith (can) 删除(distinguish)改makes human different and(from) animal.Therefore,what we can't afford to lose is faith.