求大神帮检查下面的英语文章的语法错误和一些不当的地方,标注出来的修改~The final exam is coming soon,you review?I have two courses didn't review,yesterday evening,I stole a lazy,surf the Internet to see a make me shocked

求大神帮检查下面的英语文章的语法错误和一些不当的地方,标注出来的修改~The final exam is coming soon,you review?I have two courses didn't review,yesterday evening,I stole a lazy,surf the Internet to see a make me shocked
求大神帮检查下面的英语文章的语法错误和一些不当的地方,标注出来的修改~
The final exam is coming soon,you review?
I have two courses didn't review,yesterday evening,I stole a lazy,surf the Internet to see a make me shocked news.
What's the story?Quick to say
Guangdong development bank of a branch President was sentenced to death sentence with a reprieve corruption more than 3000 yuan...
My goodness,it will happen!
Yes,in order to money can disregard everything,even do illegal crime thing.I've heard that there are various for the money and go to bad things,such as college students robbery,even if they have a good education level,still can't help them to resist the lure of money,is really a with bitter hatred!In my opinion,money is the root of evil!
I don't think so,I think that money is the root of happiness,with money you can buy what you want,and live a happy life,just think,if you don't have to worry every day after money,eat,drink,do you like things,enjoy life,the happiness!
Oh,no,some people just because want him ability is outside the scope of things,just on the way of illegal crime.
But some celebrities,such as Jackie chan,jet li,Bill Gates and so on,they have enough money and then also to help people in the poor areas.If I had money,I also will often give money to charity,to help those who need help.
Do you remember SanLu milk powder events - it is not the business interests driven by money and do the terrible things,the harm so many baby's health,this kind of behavior is really a spurn!
Well,you two,stop it money what is the root of happiness or the root of evil depends on a person's mentality,if a person use the money to help others,make the society more harmonious,so money is the root of happiness,if he for money and harm social interests,then there is no doubt that money is the root of evil!
Yes,you're right
有些人就是因为想得到他能力范围之外的东西，才走上违法犯罪的道路。
但是一些名人，例如成龙，李连杰，比尔盖茨等等，他们有了足够的钱然后还去帮助贫困地区的人们。如果我有钱了，我也会经常捐钱给慈善机构的，
你们还记得三鹿奶粉事件吧，那难道不是这些商家受到利益金钱的驱使而做下这种伤天害理的事情，危害了那么多婴儿的身体健康，这种行为真是令人唾弃！
好了好了，你们俩停下来吧，钱到底是幸福的根源还是罪恶的根源是取决于一个人的心态的，如果一个人用钱去帮助别人，让这个社会更加和谐，那么钱就是幸福的根源，如果他为了金钱利益而危害社会，那么毫无疑问金钱是罪恶的根源！
嗯嗯，你说的对~

求大神帮检查下面的英语文章的语法错误和一些不当的地方,标注出来的修改~The final exam is coming soon,you review?I have two courses didn't review,yesterday evening,I stole a lazy,surf the Internet to see a make me shocked
错误的地方不少哦,多数是由于使用中国式英语,还有一些是时态问题,整个对话看起来非常不通顺.
第一句就错了,you review?应该是 have you reviewed?,或者简化成you reviewed?
第二段的stole a lazy 完全是中国式英语,语法里根本没有的
还有很多处错误,希望你能仔细检查并作出修改

第二段开头可改成I haven't review two courses yet.”