英语作文修改【初中】1.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and many trees around it.In the car to there,I saw lots of flowers grow on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.When

英语作文修改【初中】1.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and many trees around it.In the car to there,I saw lots of flowers grow on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.When
英语作文修改【初中】
1.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and many trees around it.In the car to there,I saw lots of flowers grow on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.When I got there,my aunt was standing on front of the door.She’s a frending woman with long hair.We had great lunch,the food was delicious.Finally,we took the bus to come back.I think,the scenery there was beautiful,but the people was the most beautiful.2.Look,we’re having fun.Staying at home is the best way to spend the vacation.Now,I’m playing with my friends at home.My cat is running after my feiend Add.They are having fun.And my sister is writing back to her aunt.The letter has cost her a week.My parents are working out the expenses.To my surprise,my brother is keeping quiet!And,do you kown what am I doing?I’m writing the passage.3.My Happy Vacation.Do you want to know how did I spend my vacation?Well,every day,I got up by 8:00.After breakfast ,it’s time to do home work.After that,I do some sports and go out to have a rest.In the afternoon,I pend one hour sleeping and playing computer.In fact,I always have some other activities.Such as,I visit my friends and go swimming.Howerve,it was a nice holiday.4.My matherMy mother is a good mother and teacher.When we at home,shealways encourages me and never dotes on me.She teachers me how to be a good child.When she at school,she often helps her students.She found one of her student last winter have a cold,she went to buy medicine soon in suah snow.Well,this is her,I love her .5.La dame aux Game lias was wroten by Alexandre dionas Jr.It was an involute story.It tells about the story about Marguerite’s history is an exception,and it makes write write:”I love it ,and I have told the reader.It was a duty”.In this history,we know about the ugly world and human greedy.A bout Margueri,she was a lovely but sad woman.She wanted to have love and friends,but she couldn’t.She was in dark tines.And the world isn’t yet wolly good,then at lest it becoming better.So,wo shouldn’t afraid of future.We should letus be good,be tum,like the sad woman.

英语作文修改【初中】1.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and many trees around it.In the car to there,I saw lots of flowers grow on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.When
.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and there are many trees around it .In the trip there ,I saw lots of flowers growing on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.Getting there,my aunt was standing on front of the door waiting for us.She’s a frending woman with long hair.We had great lunch,the food was delicious.Finally,we took the bus to come back.In my opinion ,the scenery there was beautiful,but the people was the most beautiful.2.Look,we’re having fun.Staying at home is the best way to spend the vacation.Now,I’m playing with my friends at home.My cat is running after my feiend Add.They are having fun.And my sister is writing back to her aunt,which has cost her a week.My parents are working out the expenses.To my surprise,my brother is keeping quiet!And,do you kown what am I doing?I’m writing the passage.3.My Happy Vacation.Do you want to know how did I spend my vacation?Well,every day,I got up by 8:00.After breakfast ,it’s time to do homework.After that,I do some exeicise and go out to have a rest.In the afternoon,I spend one hour sleeping and playing computer.In fact,I always have some other activities.Such as,visiting my friends and going swimming.Howerer,it was a nice holiday.4.My matherMy mother is a good mother and teacher.When we are at home,she always encourages me and never dotes on me.She teachers me how to be a good child.When she is at school,she often helps her students.She found one of her student have a cold last winter,she went to buy medicine soon in such heavy snow.Well,this is her,I love her .5.La dame aux Game lias was wroten by Alexandre dionas Jr.It was an involute story.It is a story about Marguerite’s history which is an exception,and it makes write write:”I love it ,and I have told the reader.It was a duty”.In this history,we know about the ugly world and human greedy.A bout Margueri,she was a lovely but sad woman.She wanted to have love and friends,but she couldn’t.She was in dark times.And the world isn’t yet wolly good,then at lest it becoming better.So,wo shouldn’t afraid of future.We should letus be good,be tum,like the sad woman.
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A trip in summer vacation. This holiday, I went back to my hometowm to visit my relatives.It is a nice palace with many trees around it. On the journey, I saw piles of flowers growing on each side of ...

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A trip in summer vacation. This holiday, I went back to my hometowm to visit my relatives.It is a nice palace with many trees around it. On the journey, I saw piles of flowers growing on each side of the road. They are so beautiful and lovely.At the moment I reached the destination, my aunt was already standing on front of the door waiting for my arrival. She’s a friendly long haired middle-aged woman. We had a great lunch which the food was delicious especially my aunt's signature dish, the sweet and sour chicken. We had a long chat before we finally took the bus heading home. It was a wonderful memory to be there with my aunt's family,the scenery was beautiful, but the people was the most beautiful ones.2.Look, we’re having fun.Staying at home is the best way to spend the vacation.Now, I’m playing with my friends at home.My cat is chasing after my friend Ed. They look as if they have enjoyed it pretty much. While my sister is writing a letter replying her aunt.This had already cost her for a week. My parents with the glasses on are sitting on the dining table trying to work out the expenses. To my surprise,my well known naughty brother is sitting so quietly, there must be something which had gone wrong!And, do you have any idea what I am doingright now? I’m writing this passage.3.My Happy Vacation。Do you want to know how I spent my vacation? Well, every day, I got up by 8:00a.m. After a simple breakfast ,it’s time to do my home work. Then, I will do some sports and go out to have a break.In the afternoon, I spend an hour sleeping and playing my favourite computer games. In fact, I always have some other activities such as, visiting friends and go swimming. However, it was a nice holiday.4.My mother My mother is a good mother and no doubt a good teacher. When we are at home,she always encourage me and never dotes on me.She teaches me how to be a good child and a nice person .In school, she often helps her students who are having difficulties. She found out one of her student had a cold last winter, she went to buy the medicine even it is going tp snow soon. Well,this is my mother, I love her very much. 5.La dame aux Game lias was writen by Alexandre dionas Jr. It was an involute story. It tells about the story about Marguerite’s history is an exception,and it makes write write:”I love it , and I have told the reader. It was a duty”.In the history, we learned about the ugly world and human greedy. A bout Margueri, she was a lovely but sad woman. She wanted to have true love and friends, but she couldn’t. She was in dark tines. And the world isn’t yet wolly good, then at lest it becoming better. So, wo shouldn’t afraid of future.We should let us be good, be tum,like the sad woman.

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