帮忙找哈有无病句.英语!A letter to my English teacherDear English teacher:i'm your student.i like speking English and listening to English songs.i'm try singing some easy English songs.because i know that can improve my English.i hope that y

帮忙找哈有无病句.英语!A letter to my English teacherDear English teacher:i'm your student.i like speking English and listening to English songs.i'm try singing some easy English songs.because i know that can improve my English.i hope that y
帮忙找哈有无病句.英语!
A letter to my English teacher
Dear English teacher:
i'm your student.i like speking English and listening to English songs.i'm try singing some easy English songs.because i know that can improve my English.i hope that you can suggest some good English songs and some good English moives to us.i hope
these ideas you can use.
BEST Wishes
yours,
也帮忙写几句嘛.

帮忙找哈有无病句.英语!A letter to my English teacherDear English teacher:i'm your student.i like speking English and listening to English songs.i'm try singing some easy English songs.because i know that can improve my English.i hope that y
Dear Mr. Wu(写你们老师的姓):
I’m a student of yours. I like English very much. I am interested in speaking English and listening to the English songs. And sometimes I try to sing English songs, because I think it do good to improve the level of my English. Mr. Wu, can you make a list of some good songs and moives for me? Thus , I can learn more about spoken language.

我是一位高三学生，看了你的文章后有点小小的拙见，不知对不对。
1.所有的表示“我”的I都应该为大写。句子开头的第一个字母也都应该大写。
2.I'm try singing some easy English songs.我想你想表达“我正在寻找一些英文歌曲”。但是这个现在进行时中be doing句型的doing恐怕应该用在try上，因为try是及物动词。try的固定句型是try...

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我是一位高三学生，看了你的文章后有点小小的拙见，不知对不对。
1.所有的表示“我”的I都应该为大写。句子开头的第一个字母也都应该大写。
2.I'm try singing some easy English songs.我想你想表达“我正在寻找一些英文歌曲”。但是这个现在进行时中be doing句型的doing恐怕应该用在try上，因为try是及物动词。try的固定句型是try to do .所以这句话应该是I'm trying to sing some easy English songs.
3.Because I know that can improve my English. know是动词，动词后的从句是宾语从句。你的宾语从句中can improve my English缺少了主语I。即缺少了成分。that在宾语从句中不可以做成分，但是在定语从句中可以。所以应该改成Because I know that the English songs can improve my English.(宾语从句 ） Because I know the English songs that can improve my English.（定语从句）
4.i hope that you can suggest some good English songs and some good English moives to us.
suggest是及物动词。我想你想用它表达“建议，提出”的意思。但是suggest表达“建议，提出”的意思时常用that从句，而且要用虚拟语气。我看了一下觉得如果坚持要用suggest句子比较难改，不妨换作recommend,它的意思是“推荐”,这时它的固定句型是“recommend sb sth"。即这个句子可以改为
I hope that you can recommend us some good English songs and some good English moives .
5.i hope these ideas you can use. （妈妈催我吃饭了，不好意思，不能详细打出知识点了）最好改为I hope you can accept these ideas.
（我当作复习英语啦，去吃饭咯～PS:我看了楼上的回答，他写的非常好，很像高考优秀作文，建议你使用他的给你的老师，那样显得你的英语更有水准。呵呵。）

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